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Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! Lynxian (talk) 02:49, May 7, 2013 (UTC)

Embarrassed Girl Work
You got to be careful with your writing. Don't worry, my teammates and I can take care of this.

08:43, May 7, 2013 (UTC)

The opening shows a boy being bullied by some thugs for talking to their friend. He claims that a fortune teller predicted that his soul mate will have blond hair and hold something blue in her hand (the girl which he had talked to had blond hair and had a blue cellphone, he believed she was his soulmate and talked to her). When they are about to beat him, Himeko comes and beats the thugs up. Seeing her blond hair and blue cyclone stick, he falls for her. When he proposes, she declines saying that she is seeing someone and tells him that it is Bossun. He tells her to prove it and take Bossun out for a date. She agrees and later tells her story to Switch. He suggests that she should tell Bossun the truth and ask him to act like her boyfriend. She declines. So, he suggests she should ask him out to a movie without telling him the truth. She reluctantly agrees. In the clubroom, she manages to ask Bossun out after some hilarious sequences. He asks Switch to come to which Switch (knowing Hime's situation) declines. When she meets Bossun the next day, Hime is nervous when she sees both Bossun and herself are wearing 'SKET DAN' t-shirts with hooded sweatshirts. Switch and Jin are following them secretly. Bossun keeps on talking about all sorts of things while Hime starts getting more nervous. Jin notes that Hime doesn't seem to be enjoying it.When Switch tells himeko(through a device made by Switch that is fitted in Hime's ear) she makes a face like an old hag and scares bossun. They then watch the movie and then go to a restuarant to eat.There Jin tells that they look more like good friends and he wants Hime to feed Bossun.When Himeko hears this(through switchs device) she tells Bosssun that she can tell fortunes by seeing inside someone's mouth and asks him to open his mouth, he declines. So, she forces (hot) cabbage rolls in his mouth. They later go shopping, where they meet ayumi and yagi. They suggest a shop where Himeko can buy clothes. When they go there, Bossun tells Himeko that he is feeling bored. Jin comments that if he is her boyfriend, he should help her get clothes. Switch tells that he can't order Bossun making jin suspicious. Suddenly, Bossun starts getting excited and starts helping Him eko chose dresses much to Switch and jin's surprise.

Okay, let's go over your work. See how you left names that are not properly capitalized and sentences stuck with the punctuation. You make things too complicated when you leave a lot of detail in parenthesis. When you write a plot summary, you take the time to finish it and to proofread it.

Also, keep Himeko's name consistent. Either go by Himeko or Hime. Either is fine, but go with one name for this page.

If you have problems with English, use Microsoft Word. Paste your summary. It will help you remove most of the mistakes. The best way to proofread is to read it aloud or asks someone to proofread it.

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03:07, May 8, 2013 (UTC)